My B-Day
One Friday October.28, 2011 Rocky was having a birthday party. Rocky's friends are Cici and Zoey .
Zoey is sixteen Cici is fifteen Rocky is sixteen too. Cici and Zoey are coming to Rocky’s mansion.
At Rocky’s mansion everybody was fighting over rocky’s bop it game.” Rocky, Cici, Zoey do you want to go swim””ya we are changing in to are badinsuse””ok”. When rocky’s mom was taking pictures Cici did bunny ears on Rocky five times Rocky said “STOP CICI”.When it was time to do our nails rocky said
“lets do our NAILS” everybody said “OK”.
Rocky woke everybody up at 5:30 am because everybody had to leave at 8:30 am.
“Thank you for reading my story!”
Madison,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your fiction story on our classroom blog!I enjoyed reading the dialogue you put in your story. The dialogue helped me to understand your characters.
Miss Reynolds :)