My birthday party
On Friday, December, 16th, 2011 Cece Jones was getting ready to go to Build-A-Bear workshop and waiting for her best, friend Rocky Blue.
Rocky and Cece are both 16 years old.
They have been, friends since 3rd, grade and now, there in 11th grade.
While Cece was, waiting for a, sign of Rocky, she screamed “MOM, HAVE YOU SEEN, MY WHITE, BOOTS WITH, FUR?????’’
‘’THERE IN YOUR ROOM!!!’’ Mom screamed back.
‘’Maria’’ said Cece.
‘’yes’’ said Maria.
‘’please get my, white boots!!!’’ said Cece
‘’ok’’ said Maria.
Just then the door bell rang Cece ran to the door, it was Rocky!!! YEAH!!!
As soon as Cece opened the door, they both screamed!
It was finally, time to go to build-a- bear workshop in, the family limo!!!
As soon as , they got to build -a -bear , they both got started!
They both got the same hot pink bff bear and Cece , got a red sparkle dress and twinkle toes ,and Rocky got a peace sign shirt with a blue peace sign skirt.
After, they made their build a bears they went to Ichibon.
They both had sushi , with coke.
After that they went back to Ceces house, and fell asleep.
Excellent fiction story, Grace! I really enjoyed reading about your characters birthday party. The dialogue you used helped me to understand the characters in your story!
ReplyDeleteI am looking forward to reading more of your writing!
Miss Reynolds :)