Andi

November 13, 2012

Dear Mrs. McBride

I think you should have more equipment for recess because we have barley anything equipment.

The kids need more equipment because the equipment is fun for recess.

                If there barely anything equipment not a lot of kids will get to play.

Kids would be frustrated if they don’t get to play. If there is more equipment the kids would be happy.

                The equipment at recess is boring and the equipment is fantastic. Kids like the equipment

is exciting. The equipment is the kids are fun and playful and exciting.

                Kids should have more equipment because the equipment is exciting and the best

Is that the equipment is good. The equipment is good to use. The kids like the equipment

because the equipment is good to use.

                Kids are learning with the equipment because we learn how to play with them.

And we learn how to treat them. And we learn how to be nice to the equipment.

                                                                                Sincerely

                                                                                                Andi Berry