Thursday, December 6, 2012

Brooke



November 13, 2012
Dear Mrs. McBride,

            I’m very concerned about all the kids getting hurt in the gym. Two times I have seen kids getting hurt. I’m very concerned about what their parents are going to say about the kids who are getting hurt. With a bigger gym not as many kids would get hurt.        
With a bigger gym it will prevent kids from getting hurt as often .With a bigger gym we can play more games than we do .And kids will have a better time playing in the bigger gym
If we don’t expand the gym kids will continue to get hurt. There are lots of games that involve space like cat and mouse. We need lots of space to get kids fit.
In two gyms the coaches will be able to split up with groups. The larger groups will get split up to make smaller groups. With smaller groups it will be easy to learn because there are not a lot of kids in the gym.
I appreciate you reading this letter and considering expanding the gym. Please expand the gym. Thank you.


                                                                        Sincerely,
                                                                        Brooke Anna Scott

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