November 13,
2012
Dear Mrs. McBride,
I’m
very concerned about all the kids getting hurt in the gym. Two times I have
seen kids getting hurt. I’m very concerned about what their parents are going
to say about the kids who are getting hurt. With a bigger gym not as many kids
would get hurt.
With a bigger gym it will
prevent kids from getting hurt as often .With a bigger gym we can play more
games than we do .And kids will have a better time playing in the bigger gym
If we don’t expand the
gym kids will continue to get hurt. There are lots of games that involve space
like cat and mouse. We need lots of space to get kids fit.
In two gyms the coaches
will be able to split up with groups. The larger groups will get split up to
make smaller groups. With smaller groups it will be easy to learn because there
are not a lot of kids in the gym.
I appreciate you reading
this letter and considering expanding the gym. Please expand the gym. Thank you.
Sincerely,
Brooke
Anna Scott
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